Please critique me

manos...

first, what kind, and how many cups of coffee were you drinking before you laid this down?

you have some pretty blazing chops man,

especially for only playing for 3 years...

that was a great solo for a relative beginner.

the things i would work on make it killer are the obvious,like focusing on cleanliness of the blazing chops.

work on even doubles so you are snapping the second stroke instead of bouncing it.we want machine gun doubles.... nothing else will do,..just kidding.

then just focus on the subdivisions of what you are playing. am i playing an barrage of open ended non time centered notes or do i have a common denominator through all of it?

this will also help with the cleanliness if the chops because in order to play them within a subdividsion they'll have to be even.

keep ripping man

chris perra